Thursday, July 08, 2004

Evasion

Why this need for cloaks?
these unsure strides, the fake smile,
Why this turning away
& locking of doors?

1 comment:

Huckleberry Finn said...

Good one. Expresses a state of mind/a phase so clearly in 4 lines. A title that condenses the feeling could add to the depth, I feel.